Hi Asher,
It's hard to explain with words a feeling or a graphical vision one has in mind...
For me, perspective is right and must not be corrected : i wanted this effect of contreplongée, to express the crushing feeling we have in front of these huge buildings made of raw concrete. I chose vertical direction which drives the sight on the hard angle of the sculpture, maybe you noticed the unique real vertical line of the picture.
The scultpure is partially shown, it is not the subject. I just used its curves to evoke a kind of wildness which would come from the sky (Sodome and Gomorrha ?) and a quite agressive sensation above this poor urban realization, to suggest how crazy this place is with this steel lightning bolt.
But, i agree with you, the touch of cloud should be erased, it is not usefull at all.
Cedric.