Jake, malls in most places area difficult to photograph in. Legal and other issues generally do not allow the luxury of taking ones time.
It would appear that yours is a grab shot. At 1/60 ss, getting it over quickly is no mean trick.
I would have gone for greater dof; but then ss would have gone down.
What lens were you using? And is this a B&W conversion from color?
Good attempt though.
Regards.