Hi Mitch,
These are natural unprepared shots of a young woman, with two main ideas, privacy of thoughts and then teasing from this private position. The first picture has a radiance to it, the second breaks so many rules. The fingers do not flow, but a arranged like a random pile of branches on the ground, the tattoo (??) on the left hand is incompletely shown. It is what it is. But what is it? By showing this unpolished image, you seem to be showing the complexity of the person unprepared.
Since I hold that art is the embedding of some passion in a physical medium, I am not sure that what I see is that. The very fact that you have shown the images makes me think you do have specific feelings and ideas behind the two pictures.
The blur/lack of sharp focus, do not bother me. So I will not be dismissive on that account.
It is difficult here to comment more since we have no titles and do not know your style to have an idea of how to properly interpret the images based on where you are coming from.
May we work with them and repost.
Asher