Okay, how about these?

[Zach Jacob]

This was a bridal shoot... just wondering what you think is good/bad about these (by the way, these were taken about 3 days before I got my photo reflector disk...)

Katelynn's bridals (http://www.zjcreative.com/kmaddux)

I appreciate the candor! I'm trying to drum up more business, and I want the product to be worth it, so your comments are welcome! By the way, the viginettes are added in photoshop... some are a bit dark on the B&W's... I was experimenting. Fortunately the bride really liked em!

[Asher Kelman]

Hi Zach,

These pictures show a considerable improvement in the lighting. How did you accomplish that? What was your setup different from the previous shoot we saw?

Anyway, I'm sure you will get more comments. I'll add more later.

Glad you are open to feedback!

Asher

[Zach Jacob]

These were done prior to the other ones. It was a bridal shoot, so I had more control over the where and when than I did with the Wedding. That wedding was on an overcast day, and frankly I underestimated the amount of light the clouds were letting through. Some of the group shots still had flash, which is why they look better, at least somewhat...