Hi George:
Here's my take on it, worth less than two cents
... I like the concept, but find many of the elements a bit confusing. I would:
1) correct all of the lines so they are vertical and horizontal;
2) trim off the left building -- sets of three similar geometries generally carry more impact than more (and the one close pair is so super-imposed on each other, I think it qualifies as one compositionally);
3) get rid of the color or make it all color -- I find the mix inconsistent;
4) Change the frame -- it needs to be clean to match the lines of the image IMO.
5) In the end, the clouds (or lack of them) bother me a bit for such a dark sky. In a future version, I would probably leave the sky lighter, or ideally, wait for more clouds to form. If possible to re-shoot, I would try a wider lens and compose in the vertical.
Here is my 3 minute altered version:
Again, my .02 only offered FWIW...
Cheers,