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Tina Mae, part IV

Fancy White Dress

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Shane Carter

New member
Hi Nikolai...nice to see a model that does not look like a kid. :)

Some general comments, take or leave 'em. :)

1 is good, lighting a little flat on the face and the angle, white skin and dark background makes her nose overly prominate. Better to be a full-on profile, or bring back a little and get both eyes in the shot.

2 is the best of the bunch, IMO, by far...an outstanding photo! Lighting is excellent, pose is good, her looking at the camera, while certainly not necessary, is full of low-wattage energy...nice!

3 is good but her look is akward...she looks a bit strained and the head is low so it does not flatter as much. For this kind of pose, try an angle where she is looking up. It elongates the neck and streches out the body.

4. Yikes, sorry, looks like she just got hit by a bus...but does not really mind that much. :)

I keep going back to 2, wow, great shot!!!
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Nikolai,

# 2 I like very much. I'd work on it: remove any texture/wrinkles etc on the cloth. Clone in the ends of the ribbons which you have cut off (Bad!!!!!) Work on the shading of the left thigh. It's far to dark.

The perspective of #3 is too close to her. Not good! fine for special effects. (The picture becomes "normalized" only by getting close to the screen!)

This lady is a "full length woman" as I have said before and elegant that way. That is shown in picture #2.

Asher
 
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