© Will Perlis
I am not troubled by the nose having the most focus. That is different. It's not necessary to have the eyes in focus in every single case. Here I'm satisfied with the nose in focus as it brings to our mind the ability to sense pray even when it's hidden.
When I saw the picture, I had no issue with the eyes and still don't. We must look to individualize parts of pictures and choose our own levels of importance to each subunit. In doing that, one creates enough disturbance to make folk think and use their brains a little. That's one of the functions of art, I believe.
So as art, it works, for me, at least. Still for a paid assignment for a client, yes, the eyes are expected to be in focus!
Asher