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Little flower

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Eric Snyder

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I noticed this little guy on the way to my car this morning. The day was overcast/cloudy and light fairly diffuse (flat, grey); I'm curious to hear what folks think and what folks think could be done better.

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Thanks!
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Mike Shimwell

New member
Hi Eric

A very quick comment - I like the assymetric composition and the water droplet on the petal, but I find the buds behind (2) distracting from the flower itself - they brak up the edges of the petals. Technically, I think it would work better if you could pull a bit more detail and sharpness into the flower itslef - you may need to decide what is sharp and what to allow f=to fall out of focus to do that.

Cheers

Mike
 
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