A pure wild urban signature, put on an old concrete wall... That's way of life in town.
"Painting and Concrete" Cedric Massoulier
Cedric,
I'm
so sympathetic with the subject. Everything is there: concrete, paint, strcuture and sub-structure. But, my friend, how can this be a sibling to your other children? Why on earth did you
not make this absolutely geometrical and take advantage of the structure that it "is"? Is this a snap in passing? Is this near you? Are you dedicated to this seemingly haphazard design and presentation?
It could be that I'm being utterly pedantic, and foolish, asking for something ordered out of this mess. However, what advantage esthetically or politically is there in making the statement with the lens and arrangement tordu?
Unless you have some overriding intent to the contrary, this picture, IMHO, could be improved by carefully setting things square and parallel and taken in enough of each element to build a more formidable compound structure with order from the disarray. That's if this result wan't the materialization of your creative intent!
Of course, like the executioner who asks forgiveness of the king who's head he is about to cut off, I crave your indulgence in my harshness!
Asher
