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| Photography as Art Work the photographer believes might command artistic value beyond their own circle. As usual in OPF, these submissions merit critique based on intent, context and purpose. This might cover technique, composition and the like. To go out in the world, however, far more might be expected, even for things of beauty or great craft. Art criticism is harder. It requires knowledge of the arts, literature, history and esthetics. Criticism comes from study of the photograph and related works. It's an assessment of how this work might stand our culture. As Dante warned: "Abandon hope all ye who enter here! |
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Made for the "Freedom or Oppression" contest, this image has been modeled after the propaganda posters of the 1970-ies I grew up with
Libertad! ![]() C&C welcome! (Asher, you know I could not pass this up:-) |
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As a former child of the late 60's and early 70's, it reminds me of the times we climbed the fences at school to start a protest or two. Very turbulent times. I like the treatment with the black and white and the effects on the image - very powerful statement.
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Why former? Did you give up?
I like the image also but agree with Asher - maybe some blood, and maybe a finger? - DL |
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Thanks, Don! |
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No - I did not give up but I am a former child. Well, maybe not. I like to play sometimes. But battle the authority figures?- nah, I've done some policital activism/lobbying in recent years and even co-wrote a piece of legislation in California (It went to committee and died). Maybe that's why Nik's image evoked some feelings.
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Is this your famous barbed wire fence with the hills in the background? I like the stark concept. I'd rather see the fence, as in your pictures, with the wires going obliquely across the screen, a diagonal that would be a powerful compositional element. Next, in line with Liberty, I'd like blood coming from the hand! When a hand is pierced, a powerful myth in our cultures, even if you are an atheist, bolsters the emotional impact. I'd love a ragged shirtsleeve since this indicates struggle. Is this after the fact? Asher
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Fence wasn't menacing enough, so I cut it out. Diagonal : hmm, maybe, since I'm going for poster anyway. I'll think about it. Blood: I was thinking about it myself even before making the image, but it didn't make the first cut. I'll play with it, see how it goes. Thank you very much for your comments! |
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Yes Nikolai,
Now there's more pain and sacrifice! I'd consider starting the blood from half way between the clenched fingers. Also maybe rotate counter-clockwise a little to add a strong feeling of forward movement. At present it's just up. A revolution has to rise and go forward. Impressive. Asher
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Asher,
thank you for your comments and inspiration! |
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