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Old January 15th, 2009, 01:58 PM
Frank Doorhof Frank Doorhof is offline
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Today Roosmarijn was in the studio, she needed some photos for her site and I did some freestyle fashion/portrait work, here my choice of todays session.

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Old January 15th, 2009, 02:21 PM
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Hi Frank,

So this is back to your animated jump mood! I do like shot #3. I would have undone one more button. Still the effect is good.

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Old January 15th, 2009, 04:15 PM
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Hi Frank,

Quite often it is difficult to reply to your photos since you do such a thorough job on them, there isn't much to criticise to start with. Having said that, Dutch are capable of criticising anything so I'll give it a go. Mind you, I won't let my ignorance in studio matters get in the way either ;-).

Composition wise, I like #1 and #3 better. Wit regards to #2, her eyes seem to be glazing or milky. Almost all you can see are highlights in the eyes. Would it be an idea to have at least some reflected light on the left cheek and eye in #3?

Thanks for sharing these.

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Old January 15th, 2009, 11:03 PM
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I know about the Dutch lol :D

On the 2 to be honest it was a lucky shot, we just tried and got this one.
I tried two others and still liked this one more, sometimes you just have to go for the emotion and feel of a shot and if it's technically a little less than that's ok, in the end it all boils down to the emotion/story of a shot and not technical perfection.

But that's my opinion :D
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Old January 16th, 2009, 07:23 PM
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Number the I quite like, the shadow effect adds an interesting depth to the picture.
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