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Composition

Antonio Correia

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Wolfgang Plattner

Well-known member
Hi,

well done, I like the artistic output!
... the only thing for me to critize is the damaged part of the wall just above the under border of the fourth picture.
In this view it seems to me like ignored during the working process, as it is too close to the border.
 

Antonio Correia

Well-known member
Hi,
well done, I like the artistic output!
... the only thing for me to criticize is the damaged part of the wall just above the under border of the fourth picture.
In this view it seems to me like ignored during the working process, as it is too close to the border.

Thank you Wolfgang. :)
As you realize I had not spotted that area before ...
 

Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief

Antonio,

Since you opened up to the possibility of some room for modification, allow me to add my 2 cents! I like the idea and choices, except I would have the 4th picture on the lower left, then the texture works.

Also, should the space between the pictures be so bold and black. Why not a pale yellow or straw color or else white?

Asher
 

Antonio Correia

Well-known member
This Asher ?
I mean for the cross. In fact, I have erased the original composition... :)
But for this change I went to Adobe and started from there.

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Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
This Asher ?
I mean for the cross. In fact, I have erased the original composition... :)
But for this change I went to Adobe and started from there.

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Yes, the cross now fits in with the composition and no longer demands immediate attention! Now it is quite restful and sets up a mode for endless contemplation. I like that, as it is open-ended and we are allowed to make a new exploration each occasion we visit!

Asher
 
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