Eyes

Hey all! here is my latest creation, i took the shot of the eye with my camera, thats the first image, then i messed around with it in photoshop take a look! cc always looked at










and then this is the messed around with.





Thanks for Looking!

Brandon,

First what do you think about this. "messed around with it in photoshop" is sort of self-dismissive. Or is that a more tentative modest approach you have?

I can have so many ideas and reactions. But first, what does it mean to you? you already know? Haven't thought about it. What's your reaction to it?

Strong questions, but I take such work seriously, that's my way. Without know your own values, mine are not that important.

Eager to know!

Asher

I dig it. Very interesting. Looks like somebody needs some sleep =)

you know it!!

It is interesting but sorry, the PS work is not helping me get a clear message or meaning out of this. It also might help to start with an image that was either entirely sharp or the DOF was more shallow so that just the iris and pupil were in focus. Perhaps it is motion blur tho, a little hard to tell, but the top of the image is OOF and the bottom in focus. The orignial looks overexposed by a 1/3 to a 1/2 stop...better colors if spot on. Also the relections in the eye are distracting.

Not trying to be too picky but we are encouraged to give feedback so hope that is useful in the spirit of C&C.

PS It is all just opinion anyway with this kind of stuff so you can always just take or leave any/all feedback.

hey you know what shane... i really love all the feed back that i can get, so any thing that is nessicary to give me in the way of feed back.. please do!! i will take all of it into concideration for my next pecies... i am taking a computer art class this summer so now i will be able to learn a few more ideas to perfect and shape new artwork. Thanks!

Brandon Jones said:

hey you know what shane... i really love all the feed back that i can get, so any thing that is nessicary to give me in the way of feed back.. please do!! i will take all of it into concideration for my next pecies... i am taking a computer art class this summer so now i will be able to learn a few more ideas to perfect and shape new artwork. Thanks!

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Brandon,

Whatever we do, even fiddling has some direction from the brain; even experimenting. The thing you dis to post this, shows that it impresses you. So what moves you? This is a very good art exercise. Also it will help every image you think about in the future as you get in touch with your own "self".

Asher