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Midnight Ghost

Charlotte Thompson

Well-known member
A friend of mine took this shot at midnight of me- I was thinking of our world our new Prez and seemed to have just a bit of a ghost around the thought here-the haze looks trapped and old like smoke- just for fun-he doesn't know a thing too much about photography but grabbed the camera and took the shot- I do like the effect and the catch
as if thought was suspended inside space-


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Asher Kelman

OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
When "Is"0 arrives at midnight!

A friend of mine took this shot at midnight of me- I was thinking of our world our new Prez and seemed to have just a bit of a ghost around the thought here-the haze looks trapped and old like smoke- just for fun-he doesn't know a thing too much about photography but grabbed the camera and took the shot- I do like the effect and the catch
as if thought was suspended inside space-


DSC_1155.jpg
Charlotte,

I'm taken with your photograph, a glimpse in between the tick-tock of passing time. The is. This is what is means. It happens at midnight in a gap in the moments. Then despite everything that seems, we are left with a mirror is,
Is, what is, that which is, a naked vision of ourselves.

For a moment, the dried bird sings!
Do not look for her,
Do not look aside, that's your mirror,
The vision of "inevitable defeat"!
Do not remove the ashtray and make this "clean"

That's not what is!
The midnight moment
That gap in moments that arrives unheralded
Saying "This, is, what it is!
Could, would and should are banished!
No fatastasms allowed, banished!"
Your distractions and the smoke
That firebrand weapon against what is, banished!

The naked vision of self comes through
Fragile, defenseless drifting downstream
on the "Is", the bateau Is,
a dried leaf disassembling meandering,
"See! orchards and painted women buying rings,
and men with beards and collected things."

The midnight moment pries apart the second hand of the clock
That's when the Is visits and shows you a mirror.
And they'll come too, each on twirling, swirling passing leaves,
Armadas of delusions, defying the drowning darkness.

Tick-tock, tick tock, is is what is.
Watch for that gap in time, and see vapor clinging to the river.

Fashioned for Charlotte at this moment!

Asher
 
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nicolas claris

OPF Co-founder/Administrator
Bonsoir again Charlotte

Asher loves contradicting me! So do I, as a friend…

While he was posting, I made the hereunder "work" on your photo.
If I were a mirror, that's the image I'd like to send back to you, with even that slight change with a shy but present start of a smile…

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I don't think (well I hope that) the reality of the moment caught in the shot has gone fake with this interpretation…
 

nicolas claris

OPF Co-founder/Administrator
Charlotte,

I'm taken with your photograph, a glimpse in between the tick-tock of passing time. The is. This is what is means. It happens at midnight in a gap in the moments. Then despite everything that seems, we are left with a mirror is,
Is, what is, that which is, a naked vision of ourselves.

For a moment, the dried bird sings!
Do not look for her,
Do not look aside, that's your mirror,
The vision of "inevitable defeat"!
Do not remove the ashtray and make this "clean"

That's not what is!
The midnight moment
That gap in moments that arrives unheralded
Saying "This, is, what it is!
Could, would and should are banished!
No fatastasms allowed, banished!"
Your distractions and the smoke
That firebrand weapon against what is, banished!

The naked vision of self comes through
Fragile, defenseless drifting downstream
on the "Is", the bateau Is,
a dried leaf disassembling meandering,
"See! orchards and painted women buying rings,
and men with beards and collected things."

The midnight moment pries apart the second hand of the clock
That's when the Is visits and shows you a mirror.
And they'll come too, each on twirling, swirling passing leaves,
Armadas of delusions, defying the drowning darkness.

Tick-tock, tick tock, is is what is.
Watch for that gap in time, and see vapor clinging to the river.

Fashioned for Charlotte at this moment!

Asher

Asher!

Stop Bordeaux wine! ;-)


With kind LoL my friend!
 

Charlotte Thompson

Well-known member
Cedric

I must thank my friend for it his captured moment- thank you for coming by to see this moment!


Nicolas

you know I really didn't think Asher would want that because of exactly its presentation and time captured
so nice to see you in my thread and also to thank you for your version of the photo -


Asher
yes exactly my friend you understood the moment- your poem is most amazingly beautiful and truly suited exactly so-I have saved it to read again and again-for it is deeply written with much understanding and heart-one who sees and has been traveling through the world for a while and knows such moments- an old soul akin to mine I think-

The naked vision of self comes through
Fragile, defenseless drifting downstream
on the "Is", the bateau Is,
a dried leaf disassembling meandering,
"See! orchards and painted women buying rings,
and men with beards and collected things."


I knew you would understand leaving the photo intact because" in the moment always IS"
I feel honored that you were inspired-you are a talented poet-



If the day-night renders itself caught
and the moment dies around the clock
I shall become nothing more
than now
where I must stay with all its ghost-
snow
an unbecoming, swallowed in this instant
that I breathe within
the music of midnight

Charlotte-
now my friend you have inspired me!
 
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