>IMO...that has been done too much.<
That makes your effort very interesting and demanding in the same time!
I agree, just coping Rosenthal's cam's position not beeing very interesting, unless, you add a new dimension to it.
Dealing with a national monument, shooting a icon, makes it - in the first step - not easier for you, too. Though - in a second approach, it might get easier, as you get familiar with it!
This monument is a bit special, as it mixes some °abstract° elements - the soldier and ground with some °real° ones - the flag and inscription. (I wasn't aware the flag beeing real, before you did post your image.)
So cutting of the inscription brings it towards the abstracte side, like the °crops° that you showed in the last post.
Talking about more abstract: did you thought about a b&w-version?
That one below is just a quick and dirt, only; rather taking about the soldier's pain - making the air °plumby° - than the glory. Follwing your intention, you can fill up that image with both, resulting in two different images - starting from your original RAWs it'll come better.
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Making it b&w would eliminate the problem you have with the two light sources; the very cold sky and the warm spots.
If I look at your crops I'm wondering if the soldier's face have own personality, or if they were anonymised. So beside the hands, I' d try to make portraits of them; that might be interesting, with the monument shots together.
To much of disrespect?
Ah well, I have a 25 x times grandfather in bronze...
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