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Here are the two shots that I like the most from my recent attempt to do some portraits on the street.
This was during a parade in Panama, in a very sunny, hot and humid day... a typical day down here. I wanted to put these in Asher's Grab Portraits Challenge but I used flash. C&C are welcome! ![]() Ruben Alfu : Parade Girl 1 ![]() Ruben Alfu : Parade Girl 2 |
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I like both of these very much, the first one shows clearly how hot it must have been - she looks absolutely baked! Her silghtly quizzical expression and steady gaze engages us.... The second one - what a gorgeous little girl with the most beautiful eyes and smile, I like the crop and off-centre framing. Both very nice - thank you for sharing |
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Thanks so much for your comments Janet, I´m glad you like it! You are right about the first girl, she was in a marching band with the sun in her face, I had to ask her to turn to take the pic. The other girl was sitting under a white umbrella that softened the sunlight.
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Great shots Reuben for on location portraits, they both look like they were set up. The first image is my personal favorite of the two; the eyes of the parade girl are wonderful and captivating and coupled with her facial expression the image locks your focus. Well done.
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Thanks for looking Jameson, I appreciate your thoughts on it.
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This is Bill, a friendly gentleman I met in Hell´s Kitchen, Manhattan. Bill is a retired police officer and he proudly wears the badge given to him by his late friend, sheriff Bill William.
![]() Ruben Alfu : Bill, the Sheriff |
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![]() Ruben Alfu : Parade Girl 2 Ruben, Both children are delightful but this one I like the most. The lighting does not write itself into the subject, but just does a splendid job of revealing a child full of joy and trust. There are four people, it seems lining up across the way in front of her; reflections in her eyes. I find the lighting very effective and open. What did you use? Was there any modifier on the flash? Asher
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Last edited by Ruben Alfu; December 2nd, 2009 at 05:44 PM. |
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Hello Ruben. I have stared at these 2 Photos for a few days on and off. Now I realize why I am drawn to them the way I am. Life! Full of life, vigor, youth, dreams. To me #2 signifies this much much more than
#1; which is excellent in its own way but for me misses the spark that is in the eyes of #2. The aspirations and the innocence of a child. This is what makes it for me. Regards. |
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Just beautiful Ruben.
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[SIZE="2"][FONT="Garamond"]He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep..to gain that which he cannot lose. Jim Elliot, 1949[/FONT][/SIZE] [url]http://tonopahpictures.0catch.com[/url] |
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Hello Fahim and Jim, I sincerely appreciate your comments, they are very encouraging.
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