Hi Charlotte,
Good to seeing you back to more mainstream portraits. One problem with my reaction to this picture is that there's no introduction, like "snapshot at ISO 3200 with my G10" or Abstraction of man after being sentenced to 12 years in jail".
How are we supposed to frame this picture. Is there some reason behind decisions you have made, or is this just a snap to remember a friend at a party. There are lots of things that one notices: he's bent down, eyes closed, hair has no life. I can't without help, understand what's going on. I want to care for him but I can't. It's not natural and not absurd enough. I'm lost. Likely, this image means much to you since you have more information and experience.
I have preference for B&W but ask questions because of the references I have in my mind to pictures with details throughout the grayscale. So here, I'm looking for detail in his hair but there's none to find. It's all one level of blackness R 0.0, B 0.0, G 0.0.
So how did this come about? Is this an accident, the best one could do under the circumstances or this represents some artistic maneuver.
Don't take this as a rejection of your work, rather that it has not reached me.
Asher