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Asher Kelman
December 8th, 2010, 11:48 PM
These are a series of explorations for myself. My first attempt at composing with a sunset image as a primitive element here (http://www.openphotographyforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=12289), was months ago. Today I was intrigued by vapor trails of jets lit by the setting sun.

http://openphotographyforums.com/2007_OPF_AK/Asher_Kelman_2007/[Group 2]-_MG_1722__MG_1732-11 images600 pixels.jpg

Asher Kelman: Sunset Primitive # 02

Canon 5DII Stitched 8mm Fishheye Images


I hope you have fun with this! For my that's what it is, examining and toying with my infinitesimal share of the universe.

Asher

Mark Hampton
December 10th, 2010, 02:55 PM
These are a series of explorations for myself. My first attempt at composing with a sunset image as a primitive element here (http://www.openphotographyforums.com/forums/showthread.php?t=12289), was months ago. Today I was intrigued by vapor trails of jets lit by the setting sun.

http://openphotographyforums.com/2007_OPF_AK/Asher_Kelman_2007/[Group 2]-_MG_1722__MG_1732-11 images600 pixels.jpg

Asher Kelman: Sunset Primitive # 02

Canon 5DII Stitched 8mm Fishheye Images


I hope you have fun with this! For my that's what it is, examining and toying with my infinitesimal share of the universe.

Asher

Asher,

I am enjoying it - not going to say to much as I got a bottle of whisky and I am working on pictures... will give you more feedback tomorrow...

one thing - its very clean!?

will you over paint?

nice one!


cheers

Asher Kelman
December 10th, 2010, 03:03 PM
Asher,

I am enjoying it - not going to say to much as I got a bottle of whisky and I am working on pictures... will give you more feedback tomorrow...

one thing - its very clean!?

will you over paint?

Mark,

You have insight! Yes, I'll be overpainting.

nice one!


cheers

Thanks so much! 'm dong well, so far, that's two of us who enjoy it!

Asher