This is an unusual and interestingly lit subject. I particularly like the grey blue and pink painterly hues and the structure of the ice partly melted and refrozen into frozen paving stones.
The picture stands on it's own as is and does not need to change. I like it just the way you have made it!
The whole effect, lit by low rays of sunset, is captivating and unusual. It does stand on it's own but also lend itself to doing more versions perhaps as part of an artistic design or poster with text.
Someone may want it as stock too.
Furthermore, the scene itself may have had a vast expanse of the same surface with the sunlight striking silver and gold in a streak of the water all the way to the horizon.
So are there, perhaps also wider angle versions of this view.
I imagine this was taken with an appoximately 100 mm lens, but of course, I could be way off!
I am attracted to the scene as you were and there's a lot of wonder and good feelings in it.
Asher