Hi Nicolas,
Rachel is an outstanding lady. She has perfect eyes and a wonderful shaped face. As usual you light and pose her well and she is both attractive an also not brassy but rather tentative and vulnerable. She does not have the in your face attitude that has been so fashion. All three pictures are wonderful (without deep discussion of what you might do better because this is just the initial shoot. I'll touch on just a few, but this does not detract form my positive impression: shirt not crisply ironed well and her hair is not either casually combed or professionally done. Maybr it's the cut and hair treatment. Maybe what I'm seeing is just an extension that has a different color, or perhaps my judgement is way off.
I do have questions about the skin texture as it seems that the edits are made sequentially and this seems to impact overall smoothness, or maybe it's just her skin?
Alternative skin processing methodology comes up from time to time.
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I found this skin processing treatment on the thinkcamera website. I don't like the eyes being so "glass-perfect"! It's a good intermediate step, but I'd back this off somewhat. I really advocate blending back with the original about 5% but anyway, that's just my taste. Just like $2000 1D MartkIII cameras on some websites, if it's too good to be true we should take pause. Even in vogue, the eyes don't look like blobs of perfect glass! Tht one gets from Saks Fifth Avenue or Tiffany's!
You might find this skin treatment methodology interesting. Anyway, I'd love it if you actually could have the time to test it for us on this picture to see how it works and if it is effective for darker complexions too. It's one thing to promote a methodology, it's another to apply it to one's own picture.
You can find the entire article "Skin Retouching: Masterclass: How to (part 1)"
here ! Your opinion would be valuable!
Thanks for sharing your work on this lovely model. Hope we'll see more!
Asher