fahim mohammed
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Hate at first sight....
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Wasn't I good enough?
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Andy brown
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Hmmm!,...two kids, two eyebrows!
Whoops, sorry,...SORRY!
I'm sure they're very cute up close.
Whoops, sorry,...SORRY!
I'm sure they're very cute up close.
fahim mohammed
Well-known member
Hi Andy,
Nothing to be sorry about..a valid observation. Helps me improve.
Now, how would you suggest i could improve the picture to convey this situation?
Regards.
Nothing to be sorry about..a valid observation. Helps me improve.
Now, how would you suggest i could improve the picture to convey this situation?
Regards.
james sperry
New member
hello fahim,
personally, i like the picture that you have posted. but, i don't see a child thinking he isn't good enough. i see a two brothers with curiousity of eachother.
but, if i was to attempt to convey this situation ..... in my mind, i see a family holding a newborn with the oldest son standing off to the side in solitude, looking at the family emotionless.
fahim mohammed
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Kristin Nathanson
New member
This is a great photo. I like how both of them are looking at each other...and they do look curious.
Doug Kerr
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Hi, Fahim,
A really cute shot.
Still, it's sad to think that the older sibling's thoughts might have been as your title suggests.
Of course, I even got sad over the discovery that a firm that provides tracking for lost pets is called "Home Again".
Best regards,
Doug
Hate at first sight....
A really cute shot.
Still, it's sad to think that the older sibling's thoughts might have been as your title suggests.
Of course, I even got sad over the discovery that a firm that provides tracking for lost pets is called "Home Again".
Best regards,
Doug
fahim mohammed
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fahim mohammed
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Hi Doug, appreciate you looking in. I am sure he will get over his feelings as time goes by, and
starts looking after his little sister.
' home again '...reflection of our times?
Take care.
starts looking after his little sister.
' home again '...reflection of our times?
Take care.
William Blackford
New member
Fahim
I respect this attempt. It is a seldom spoken of, much less captured, moment. But the subtlety of such an observation requires very tender care and so seems diluted by the distracting use of color. B&W, at least to these eyes, is a concept sharpener here. Kudos for the insight to be present at the genesis of sibling rivalry. It speaks of good photographic instincts, but with such a wispy yet significant idea one has to be careful familiarity with the subject does not trick into leaving the work of full conveyance undone.
Thank you for posting this.
I respect this attempt. It is a seldom spoken of, much less captured, moment. But the subtlety of such an observation requires very tender care and so seems diluted by the distracting use of color. B&W, at least to these eyes, is a concept sharpener here. Kudos for the insight to be present at the genesis of sibling rivalry. It speaks of good photographic instincts, but with such a wispy yet significant idea one has to be careful familiarity with the subject does not trick into leaving the work of full conveyance undone.
Thank you for posting this.
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Rachel Foster
New member
All I can say is ....those two kids are adorable.
fahim mohammed
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William, thanks for your very constructive and observant comments. Very much appreciated.
Of course, a belated welcome to OPF.
Regards.
Of course, a belated welcome to OPF.
Regards.