Funny, Eric,
I was thinking the eyes might be made less bright by slightly brightening the models right cheek in images 2, 3 and 4! In these pictures, the luminance will most likely have to be adjusted for printing anyway, depending on so many factors. It's hard to judge such dark images without the actual ambient light settings of the photographer.
Frank,
I'm delighted and surprised! These pictures show this very wholesome and healthy looking female as intriguing, even beguilng. She seems comfortable and here, life is simple and uncomplicated. "Here I am, young, beautiful, no issues, no baggage, just me and perhaps 2 yards of blue fabric at the most! The polka dots? They're like my life, clean and white, as fresh as rain drops!" This is done by your clean simple uncomplicated posing, wardrobe and lighting.
However, it is of course not that simple. I remember after World War II, there was a Romanian riddle, "How do you make a Romanian omelette?" These are the steps: 1. Steal and egg!
Nobody had steps 2 or 3, it was just step # 1 that was so difficult! Here, the exceptional model is that hard to find egg. not that we all can cook, but without it, we have no omelette! I like your choice and you cook a wholesome dish!
Asher