Steve Febbraro
New member
My pre-teen daughter was on the phone, and I convinced her to continue her coversation in the same room where my strobes were located. Your C&C is welcomed.
Hi Steve,
You have for yourself a lovely subject! I like the light as a start as the source is large and reasonably close. There's some exploration you might of course have considered already. You might, for example, try elevating the light a little more. I'd love to see her hair and try a white card to reflect light on her left side and behind the hair to highlight it.
You just need to bribe her with more minutes!
Asher
BTW, this picture does benefit from a simple S curve in photoshop. Try it in a layer and then use 50% of whatever you though was perfect!
Thought it was set up like that! Don't hesitate to break the rules when the subject melts your heart, after all that's what we want! Besides, the strong oblique white form of the phone really changes the dynamic of the centrally placed eyes.
What f stop is that and what format?
Asher
Steve,
I see now you will have to make even more.
I really like the curve of her hand. Did you take more?
Asher