James, my friend, please allow me to be critical of this obviously well done shoot, when I like the picture a lot! Bear with me as I feel we miss a lot when we just get the very end of what excited you and made you shoot in the first place.
Why on earth dont you have the lady with her shopping? That tells the story, James! That background is valuable.
The idea has crept into Street Photography, like some irrevocable law, "handed down to Moses", in the Bible,
"A good picture speaks for itself!"
Well is that really true? Why would we need recordings with headphones at National Museum Exhibitions, to hear the voice of the curator, at each numbered picture, as we walk through the salons?
This lady is indeed interesting. Your picture is wonderful, but we need that story!
Someone else, with the new 100 MP Hassy or Phase One, could frame just her right nostril, perfectly lit, composed and photographed, again with the title, "Dinner Lady"!
I like the picture and I love the title. Be more generous in both. Sorry to be so pushy, but you have it all, good sensibility, great choice of subject, the best camera one can find and an eager audience!
Do you happen to have the first "missing" image, the estaqbilishing shot", in a movie before we zoom in? That would be really interesting. You found the apt subject to record. But please, think wider view!
Hope my confrontation is not found far too pushy, as I am concerned about letting something go, but also being appreciative and respecting of your work!
Asher