Warning: harsh comment!* see footnote
just this evening 6:40 pm-natural light- dunno if the sun is too much? welcoming all crits and comments-
Hi Charlotte,
Unless they had just left on a trans-galactic flight, I'd not give this any attention! You have done so much better and you know. Yes, of course, the humanity of it is there; a mother's nose squashed against her precious daughter, and all because of you! But, to that point we have a memento, a snapshot to treasure. Want a photograph? We want a minimum of compositional effort and technical competence.
You already know what's wrong, don't you? Of course the sky is blown, the squashed nose is not pretty and we are too close to enjoy the geometrics of the hug. So I'd not spend any time with this. The trouble is that you love them so dearly that you can't put this aside! Don't worry, we do love her! We already have pictures of the little munchkin that are so precious
here. So why go backwards?
Asher
Now if you are new to OPF, please don't be alarmed by the horrible things I'm saying. We're kind until we get to know you, but we don't ever pretend something is wonderful photography when it is hardly worthwhile not deleting. That is not kind to anyone. We aim to nurture people on their pathways to creative excellence, not just to pander to good manners. We have enough credit with Charlotte that she wouldn't expect otherwise!