Asher Kelman
OPF Owner/Editor-in-Chief
Hi Charlotte,
Of course the concept and the picture catches out attention. The title and introduction are helpful. This is about what an infant is and might become. The flowers being some sort of talisman , curtain, barrier and crystal bowl with all sorts of relationships to other places and times. The title says, "Dangerous" indicating perhaps that the girl might, like Maurice chevalier's "Thank Heaven for Little Girls", flash her eyes one day and send us "crashing through the ceiling".[http=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fyBffCiGr8c]Cick here[/url] for video!
Thank heaven for little girls
for little girls get bigger every day!
Thank heaven for little girls
they grow up in the most delightful way!
Those little eyes so helpless and appealing
one day will flash and send you crashin' thru the ceilin'
Thank heaven for little girls
thank heaven for them all,
no matter where no matter who
for without them, what would little boys do?
Thank heaven... thank heaven...
Thank heaven for little girls!
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Having said this, I find the execution so far just a beginning. The girls eyes are not sharp and the stems of the flowers to no obvious purpose are untidy over her face. I'd love to see more of this as it progresses. IOW, I like the concept and the sketch, but would demand more of you in the execution: composition, technical care with here face and so forth.
Keep it up, it's just my thoughts only!
Asher
Of course the concept and the picture catches out attention. The title and introduction are helpful. This is about what an infant is and might become. The flowers being some sort of talisman , curtain, barrier and crystal bowl with all sorts of relationships to other places and times. The title says, "Dangerous" indicating perhaps that the girl might, like Maurice chevalier's "Thank Heaven for Little Girls", flash her eyes one day and send us "crashing through the ceiling".[http=http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fyBffCiGr8c]Cick here[/url] for video!
Thank heaven for little girls
for little girls get bigger every day!
Thank heaven for little girls
they grow up in the most delightful way!
Those little eyes so helpless and appealing
one day will flash and send you crashin' thru the ceilin'
Thank heaven for little girls
thank heaven for them all,
no matter where no matter who
for without them, what would little boys do?
Thank heaven... thank heaven...
Thank heaven for little girls!
All lyrics are property and copyright of their owners.
All lyrics provided for educational purposes only
Having said this, I find the execution so far just a beginning. The girls eyes are not sharp and the stems of the flowers to no obvious purpose are untidy over her face. I'd love to see more of this as it progresses. IOW, I like the concept and the sketch, but would demand more of you in the execution: composition, technical care with here face and so forth.
Keep it up, it's just my thoughts only!
Asher